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A third-person narrator describes Winnie waking up after plastic surgery in Beijing. She examines her reflection, noting the new shape of her eyes, and thinks about the other procedures that will make her look different. Winnie walks home in the smog and traffic and, in her rented flat, rejects a call from Ava, the only person who knows how to reach her.
Winnie reflects on how Ava, when she saw Winnie packing in their Stanford dorm room, offered to let Winnie use an essay of hers in class. When Winnie asks why she wouldn’t fear getting caught, Ava grins and says she blames Winnie for stealing. Ten years later, when Winnie needed a reference letter to file for her green card, Ava teased Winnie about whether she loved Bernard and then wrote “everything the authorities wanted to hear” (172).
When she reached out to Ava about Boss Mak’s transplant, Winnie quickly perceived that Ava’s successful husband neglected her and she was downplaying her son’s developmental issues. Winnie sums up Ava’s life as great on paper but rotten everywhere else.
When Ava scolded her for cheating with her business, Winnie guessed Ava was angry because Ava felt she deserved a life of wealth—the life she was promised if she worked hard—while Winnie reached out and took it. But when Ava ran her first errand while in Hong Kong, Winnie perceived she was exhilarated. During Ava’s first return, Winnie describes her as the perfect con, polished but likeable. She left behind her cell phone as misdirection so the sales person wouldn’t examine the bag too closely, and this became her signature move. Ava enlarged their business and pushed Winnie to go along with Mandy Mak’s suggestion for a duplicate black factory. When she visited Dongguan, Ava reported that the workers were efficient and well paid. Winnie thinks Ava’s superpower is her ability to get people to want to take care of her. She appears harmless and innocent but is ruthless beneath. Ava said she had a great time at dinner, sang karaoke with the men, and arranged to send in the girls as a prank.
Then Winnie reflects on what happened next. Their business prospered with the new factory, and Ava hired more shoppers. Users on online forums raved about how their eBay store had the latest styles. The end began with Mary-Sue Clark of Canton, Ohio, when her husband bought her a Louis Vuitton Clapton wallet from Neiman Marcus for her 50th birthday. When the clasp came loose, Mary-Sue took the wallet to the Louis Vuitton store for repairs, where they informed her the wallet was a fake. Mary-Sue informed Neiman Marcus. The store tightened their return policies, and word spread to other retailers. Ava and Winnie’s shoppers grew nervous and quit. Inventory piled up, but the Maks still demanded to be paid. Once law enforcement was involved, Winnie decided to hide in China. Ava decided to turn herself in.
Back in her apartment, Winnie reads about a British lab growing diamonds and contemplates a new business endeavor. Ava calls Winnie’s burner phone and says everything is going as planned. The detective is falling for her story, especially the bit about the factory girl missing two fingers.
Ava tells the detective that her trip to Dongguan was the point of no return in her story. She left the city to visit her grandmother in Hong Kong to celebrate her birthday and reflects, “These were my people, these clean, cheerful, bright-eyed souls” (194). Ava claims, “This was the true me. I was a mother, an aunt, a wife. I was a woman who was loved. I was the opposite of Winnie, with her severe, solitary life” (195). Her cousins complain about practicing medicine in China and describe Singapore as very clean and highly policed. Ava thinks of the men at dinner and how that crocodile Birkin is a threat. As she rides to the Shenzhen airport, driven by a young man from the country who has dreams of staring his own business, Ava wonders about the life her mother might have led in Hong Kong if Ava’s father didn’t go to graduate school in Massachusetts.
Ava says the detective must be wondering why it took her three more months to turn herself in. She says she was worried about her family. She thought she could free herself from Winnie’s grip but now realizes only the truth will save her.
Ava continues her narrative: She returns home with a new glass vase to apologize to Oli. He had an exhausting time trying and failing to potty train Henri. Ava puts on a children’s video to occupy Henri while Olivier naps and she texts Winnie about the new season’s bags. When Oli is angry she let Henri watch TV, they fight again. Ava apologizes and tries to persuade Oli to take Boss Mak as a transplant candidate. Ava protests to the detective that Olivier was just promoted to head of surgery, which proves he knew nothing about Boss Mak’s shady dealings. Ava insists Oli is very ethical.
These chapters introduce the surprising twist that the narrative Ava has been constructing for the detective is much different from the story told from Winnie’s point of view. In Chapter 12, which describes Winnie hiding out in China and getting plastic surgery to change her face, Ava is not Winnie’s dupe but her partner and conspirator. Winnie’s account of their time in college and Ava’s help getting her green card reveal a character who is far from a victim but rather someone ruthless and ready to game the system. Ava’s letter constructed a narrative tailored to what she knew the authorities wanted to hear. Ava’s ability to construct a false front casts doubt on the reliability of Ava’s earlier narration. Her tendency to Live Up to Expectations allows her to participate in Counterfeit, Disguise, and Deception. This works because of Negative Beliefs About Asia and Asian Identities.
Winnie suggests that Ava’s participation in her counterfeit business is motivated by resentment that Ava’s efforts to achieve, perform, and measure up to expectation have not yielded the satisfaction she felt she was promised. Ava feels cheated and so resorts to cheating. Winnie claims Ava enjoyed their con and invented her own strategies for returns, which contradicts Ava’s insistence to the detective that she hated lying. Winnie depicts an ambitious business manager who manipulates Negative Beliefs About Asia and Asian Identities to engage in Counterfeit, Disguise, and Deception. Ava made similar suggestions about Winnie. Winnie’s perspective suggests Ava played up what the detective assumed about a black factory in China—that it is an airless sweatshop exploiting helpless young women who are desperate and maimed.
Winnie’s plastic surgery speaks to the theme of counterfeiting and parallels the “face” that Ava is presenting to the detective. This procedure presumably reverses or modifies the double-eyelid surgery Ava noted in the first chapter. The first surgery would have created a visible crease in Winnie’s eyelid, replacing the monolid she might have had before and making her eye appear rounder. (Monolid describes an eyelid shape with no visible crease, lending the appearance of “one lid,” and is a common feature among people of East Asian descent; the double-eyelid surgery would make Winnie appear more Western.) This focus on eyes plays on themes of seeing and perception that are upended in this section. Winnie’s decision to revise the original surgery suggests that she now deems Western beauty standards inauthentic, while viewing her natural, more oval-shaped eyes as more authentic to herself and culture.
After this twist, Ava’s further first-person story appears in an entirely different light. The reader notices how she manipulates her story, emphasizing her own feelings of guilt and regret and downplaying her culpability. Part of what makes her a believable character is that she represents herself as part of a wholesome family, acknowledging her part in the fights with her husband, and emphasizing her struggles as a mom. She also puts undue emphasis on the fact that she is proud of Olivier, which makes the reader wonder if this, too, is a front. When she reflects on her mother, however, Ava seems wistful, especially when she thinks how her mother—and Ava and her brother—would have had a different life growing up among their family in Hong Kong.
Ava also plays on the detective’s Negative Beliefs About Asia and Asian Identities by creating a contrast between her clean, sanitized life in California and the smog, sleaze, and corruption in China. The gift she receives in China is a valuable handbag made of crocodile skin, which suggests a predatory exchange. The vase Ava brings Olivier is one she bought at the airport and is made of clear and seemingly innocent glass.
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